Historical Analysis Essay Submission Assignment
Order ID 53003233773 Type Essay Writer Level Masters Style APA Sources/References 4 Perfect Number of Pages to Order 5-10 Pages
Feedback for 7-3 Historical Analysis Essay Progress Check 3
This is coming along really well and you have some solid research information to help you formulate a good argument for your thesis. I think once you shape this into your final draft next week, it’s going to be a strong research paper! I have a few comments on the evidence and consequences sections, but I think you’re really pulling together the work and this started by explaining what the ERA was and how it was developed. That provides the reader with the information needed to follow with the rest of the argument.
The historical narrative was clearly explained as well – this was a logically laid out argument for your thesis and you told what happened, when, and why over time in a way that helped explain your own research conclusions. I would work in your primary sources in more detail here. If you’re mentioning Phyllis Schlafly, for instance, explain, using a quotation from her work, what her position was on the ERA (as an example). You’ve done well with the secondary sources though!
The message here is well done. I think this helps you know what to include or leave out of the paper for the most convincing argument and to meet the reader’s needs and interests.
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